Your 10" numbers are ok, but it looks like there are some gaps in the patterns. If you haven't done so already, try giving the barrel and choke a real good scrubbing and make sure it's nice and dry, oil free. Sometimes when I'm patterning I get a little lax on keeping the plastic wad buildup cleaned out and they start looking a little wonky. Also cold temperatures can mess things up, as can a little wind. Your jellyhead patterns look a little better than the Carlson from what I can see, between the two.